Thriller Idea Feedback

Overall feedback

• The general consensus of the feedback was that our idea was too complex for an opening and would confuse the audience too much. 
• The narrative of our thriller opening had good feedback but for the time we had to fit it into would make it crammed and confusing.
•  It was also said that our idea wasn't much of an opening but more of the whole film. 
• Our idea was on the edge of being a thriller and very close to being a horror. 
• it was pointed out that there were flaws in our plot.

after our feedback we decided that we were going to change our idea all together to a less complex, more understandable and shorter.